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Old 10-10-2007, 04:20 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Autumn’s Quilt
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The autumn leaves drift to the ground
In flakes of orange, reds, brown and gold
Float to earth like a surreal snow
In the breeze of the golden harvest
As they fall they do a waltz
In the wild October breeze
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Dancing around to autumns harmony
Quietly coming to rest
On this peaceful autumn morning
Their scattered on the quiet floors
Also known as the autumn landscape
Sawn like a multi-colored quilt
Created with mother natures hand
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In the misty October morn
The golden harvest long underway
Fields agitated and cut deep
Like the collected thoughts
In the corners of my mind
The radiant sun slowly simmers away the mist
Illuminating the lovely October landscape
As the wind disrupts the tranquil scene
Chasing the leaves away
Dissipating them like my fantasies
 

Old 10-11-2007, 12:35 AM   #2 (permalink)
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WOW Bear..... this is like you saw right inside my mind... Autumn is my favorite time of year and I LOVE how you rendered it here. You did what I was trying to do when Eroticism came out of me. This is truly Magnificent....... I can see it all so clearly in my head. Thank You for a truly beautiful rendition of my favorite time of year.


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Old 10-11-2007, 02:04 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Bear this was a beautiful read...and I can only imagine the lovely autumn leaves falling in Chicago right now...wonderful imagery...

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Old 10-11-2007, 02:45 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Thank you Mysty so happy you love this poem I too long Autumn and right now it is more like autumn here cold windy and turning beautiful.
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Nomad Thank you so much you'll have to visit chicago in autumn sometime I live about 180 miles west of chicago way out in the country and it is beautiful here especially near the river
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Old 10-19-2007, 10:39 PM   #5 (permalink)
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You have some very perceptive images, Bear. My favorite is probably
"The radiant sun slowly simmers away the mist
Illuminating the lovely October landscape"
That brings back fond memories of many a misty morning.

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Old 10-20-2007, 03:56 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Thank you so much Terence
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