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AWAKENING - Haiku

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Old 12-04-2006, 02:12 AM   #1 (permalink)
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awakening sun
beams through open window
alarm clock sounds
 

Old 12-04-2006, 05:56 AM   #2 (permalink)
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excellent job

nice signature pic
 

Old 12-04-2006, 02:59 PM   #3 (permalink)
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:word_thankyou: Harry

glad you like my sig pic

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Old 12-04-2006, 06:27 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Hi Echoes!! I love it!!

I hit snooze again
Close the curtain from the Sun
Back to sleep I go!


LOL, just wanted you to smile!

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Old 12-05-2006, 03:27 AM   #5 (permalink)
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you're welcome Lisa
 

Old 12-05-2006, 05:59 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Hi Painted

that is funny, I like your take on it

thanks for commenting
 

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Old 06-20-2007, 06:50 PM   #7 (permalink)
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If there is any form of poetry that I LOVE...it's haiku. To use such few words and still be able to convey beauty to my mind and heart is a wonderful thing. Reading this made me think of how I woke up yesterday morning. It was soo beautiful and calming, yet exilerating. Nothing like waking up in the morning to the sun beaming on your face...bright light is the best way to awaken...but then agin there is that alarm clock that for a moment disturbs your peace, makes the oh so melodic tunes in your mind(morning sound track) stop...but the best pert is gazing back into the beautiful morning sun after handling the distraction....thanking God for another day of life.....BEAUTIFUL write Echoes
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Old 06-21-2007, 05:25 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Hi Ladylyric

thank you so much for your kind response to my haiku

welcome to the site
 

Old 06-23-2007, 06:09 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I really loved this Haiku.
I've never needed an alarm clock. I just tell myself what time to wake up and I do.
The sun casting it's light into the window is so beautiful.
Thanks for sharing
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Honor the old ones in deed and name
let love and light be our guides again.
 

Old 06-24-2007, 01:16 AM   #10 (permalink)
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haha! nice and fun!
 


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