Creative Traditional:

[tham]

Time in a bottle
Ship in a bottle
I was in a bottle
But now I am free
Time keeps slipping
Time be tripping
But time will never be
Idle, Or set still for
A moment, Like a
Rope that's slipping free
If we could grab that time
And hold on tightly
If we could use that time
And not take it lightly
Would that then set us free TMH 2/5/2012

[nomadicrhymer]

Very nicely done... clear and concise message. Smooth read, tham We do need to make much of our time... I think most of us, me included, wastes way too much of it.

Nomad

[tham]

Thank you for the read. If only we could, make a determined effort to use it wisely.There was a report on yahoo about time, if we really counted what we do and when, we have more time than we imagine.Again, thank you for the read.

[MsJacquiiC]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by tham

If we could grab that time
And hold on tightly
If we could use that time
And not take it lightly
Would that then set us free

Last famous words of infamous genie in a bottle? lol - couldn't resist - but a very nice read. Enjoyed the rhythm of this piece. Thanks for the share

J.

[Wind]

to be set free from time and let it be released

is that what it says it wonderful