Creative Traditional:

[tham]

If you could paint a picture,
of you in your candy store
Would it be of candy?
or, "something so much more"

[MsJacquiiC]

Hi Tham and welcome to JPiC - do feel free to introduce yourself via the Member Introductions section. Also - apologies for having accidentally deleted your post in the shoutbox, but the post really needed to be in the forums anyway. If you haven't done so - please see I'm Here. Now What Do I Do Once Registered? if you haven't done so thus far - but you seem to have posted this thread correctly

Anyway - nice little short write. I loved the candy store back in the day. In fact - one of my most favorite artists (Keith Sweat) has a new album out and in my daily rotation. The first track on the album:

Keith Sweat Candy Store - YouTube

Keith Sweat Candy Store - YouTube

Anyway - a little nostalgia going on when I read your poem. I'd go with the "so much more" unless of course (like I posted in the shoutbox) there's sugar babies on the menu.

Thanks for the share.

J.

[tham]

ty for the read, timing or coincidence about the new album, things that make you go hmm

[nomadicrhymer]

If I could paint a picture
of me in a candy store
You'd want to break a piece of
the nude chocolate galore

Nomad

[tham]

If I were in that candy store,
I would not break the nude
chocolate galore,
but savor it
and ask for more

[MsJacquiiC]

Oh! But nude chocolate
(so milky, so inviting)
doth water your mouth.
Savor the spittle;
Candy store of the south.

[nomadicrhymer]

If I could paint a picture
of me in a candy store
Brush strokes of melted sugar
Syrup, fudge and caramel
Create the perfect fine art
A centerpiece of love

Nomad