Creative Traditional:

[Sally Roberts]

"Cherry Blossoms in the Snow"

Where once they swayed among the trees,
Oh perfect petals soft and white.
Floating gently through the breeze,
Adding pleasure with delight.

Oh perfect petals soft and white,
Landing lightly on the earth.
Adding pleasure with delight,
Waiting for another birth.

Landing lightly on the earth,
As winter winds begin to blow.
Waiting for another birth,
Cherry blossoms in the snow.

As winter winds begin to blow,
Floating gently through the breeze.
Cherry blossoms in the snow,
Where once they swayed among the trees.



Sally aka Forestdawn

[~Serenity~]

Hi Sally! Wonderful piece here!!!! The title alone caught my attention - and then followed by such an inspired piece =) An amazing style too! Seems like it would be difficult to write - but awesome fun to read! Great stuff Sally, Keep it up and thanks for sharing!!

Smiles!,
~Serenity~

[lanaia74]

Absolutely beautiful! VERY well done!

[Sally Roberts]

Thanks so much.
Your comments are most inspiring. If one were to have writers block, they certainly wouldn't have it long. Everyone here at JPiC keep me inspired to write more.
I love reading everyones posts as well. this is great place to be. Thank you for all your feedback.

Blessed be
Sally aka Forestdawn

[PaintedDiary]

Dear Sally,

Yes, the title speaks volumes and is a lovely prerequisite for the beautiful piece you have scribed here. The poem was fluent, quite lovely, and had stunning imagery. Wow!! Keep'm Comin! LOL Thank you for sharing this awesome write!!

Painted

[Sally Roberts]

Thanks Kim,

I love it here. Thanks so much for you thoughtful comments.

There is so much to read here. I sometime loose track of time. Thanks for the wonderful place to share and learn from each other.

Thanks again
Blessings
Sally aka Forestdawn

[erikestabrook]

liked this poem layered phrases like that provide great imagery