City

Benny · 05-11-2007, 09:58 PM

Wonderful work...I do think I've been right there at that spot you've painted for us. Great stuff!

mangodroplet · 02:10 AM

nomad-yes.....it's like.....when people from the city move to the rural country, they think something is wrong....

noise maybe just means that there is someone there :]
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Thanks Benny :]
*huggles*

I loves you!
<congrats on the story btw!>

MsJacquiiC · 05-31-2007, 07:19 PM

Ah the cacophany of street-sounds
The hustle & bustle
is nearly seen in the lines
of your haiku.
Vivid imagery - I could almost
hear the taxi cab blow.

Nice write MANGO - thanx for the sharing

Jacquii.

mangodroplet · 05-31-2007, 08:20 PM

Thanks MsJ! *huggles*
Imagery makes the world go round.....

bloodletting_of_the_sky · 06-05-2007, 10:37 AM

i am wondering just what action requires the use of vocal cords to produce screaming and screeching in a alley.... most definitly great usage of the word cacophany... produces a still running chill down my back when read....
7 stars out of ten for you...