Creative Traditional:

[mangodroplet]

So, i decided to actually make a Haiku Collection :]
It has a double meaning....I hope you find it :]


Echoes of Life

Emerging slowly,
masquerading in the light
that shines though the leaves.

Blossom releases
tumbles, careens down the cliff
Into the abyss.

Swift, raging river
carves its way though the Canyon
Starts with one small stream.

Wind howls though the night
causing trees to swiftly bend
If only still unseen.

Dying sunlight of
explosions of rich colors
In the twilight sky.

[erikestabrook]

I say you stuck to the norm of haiku writing,
it was still impresive to see what you chose and it did go togther very well,
showed up every haiku I'd ever done at least to me

[Jer4clarity]

Anna,

I see beginning and endings with this haiku about life. And I'm sure it is true to form, however this is one of the forms I'm not to good at. My Fav;

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Wind howls though the night
causing trees to swiftly bend
If only still unseen.

I'm pretty sure this is what I said last night.

it didn't go through last night

Jerry

[mangodroplet]

Thanks erik!
Haha.....I'm sure our haikus will have a close fight for msJ to choose :]
hehe...i tried to stay right in the haiku style, since I want it in the site

Thanks jer :]
*huggles*
My fav haiku i the blossom one...But i'm glad you like my wind one :]
Thanks!

[Echoes]

stunning work, love the title

your talent shines

[mangodroplet]

Thanks Echoes :]
*huggles*

[erikestabrook]

oh I couldn't resist saying your title is superb very sellable title

[mangodroplet]

Thanks!
It just came to me...
:]
hehe.
the best titles are the ones that you don't have to think hard before it comes to you :]]
thanks!

[Bear]

such an amazing awesome penning Mango magnificent expression of life from beginning to end. I am in awe of your imagation
hugs kisses
bear

[mangodroplet]

*huggles*
thanks....
It really means a lot for your reading :]