Creative Traditional:

[Bear]

Evening Song

As the haloed alabaster moon illuminates the Earth
An evening song drifts through the countryside
Natures aria sails on a warm summer breeze
Listening to the sounds with excited anticipation
Of nature’s majestic beauty.
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At sunrise the skies turn to golden fire.
As the world treasures the last moments of sleep
While the sun slowly rises in the eastern heavens
And a sweet dew covers the wild flowers
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Gold and maroon echoes through the topaz sky
Virtually translucent in its sheer beauty.
It’s mystifying power stimulates life
With all it’s stratospheric miracles
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Extremely precious is the magnificent grace of the evening
Let this elegant bond between nature and life
Fill this world with peace and love
Evermore

[Kit Carson]

I like this one a lot. Out at sea and more recently working third shift at work, you get more in tune with those feelings.

The Following Text Is Quoted:

At sunrise the skies turn to golden fire.
As the world treasures the last moments of sleep

Very good Bear!

[Bear]

thanks alot Mike so happy you enjoy my works
handshakes
Bear

[Jer4clarity]

Bear,

Your description is so vivid I see the sky in my minds-eye. I've read it more than once to capture your imagery. Awesome write!

My Fav:

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Extremely precious is the magnificent grace of the evening
Let this elegant bond between nature and life
Fill this world with peace and love
Evermore

Jerry

[Bear]

Thank you so much Jerry for your fantastic comment
handshakes
Bear

[nomadicrhymer]

Bear, this is a spectacular poem...and brings to mind all the beautiful sunsets I am going to be seeing in a couple weeks when I go to Belize Thanks for posting...so peaceful and enriching to the soul!

Nomad

[Bear]

thank you so much my sweet Nomad I hope that you have a great time at home and enjoy the beautiful beaches and sunsets and sunrises
hugs kisses
Bear

[Sally Roberts]

Dear Pooh Bear:
I can describe your poem in just one word..
BREATHTAKING!!!!!!!!!!!


A masterpiece in every sence of the word! I read it several times. Rated it excellent and then read it again. SUPERB write here bear. I absolutely LOVED every word of it!

Blessings

[KayaOtah]

Nice poem, it captures me into it...
*smiles*

[Bear]

Thank you so much Sally I am happy that you love my poems and stories and I love you writings also. thank you so much for the excellent rating.
hugs kisses
Bear
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thank you so much KayaOtah for your wonderful comment I am happy that you felt like you were there
handshakes
Bear