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A Falcon’s Path

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Old 11-19-2007, 03:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
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A Peregrine Falcon circled,
mountain escape below
alone on wind glided
in confident balance.

His gold wings carved
against silent skies
my attention satisfied
a revelation to sense.

He changed path,
over head flew, fading way
on westward passage.
His likeness shinned in my eyes.

I searched for feather
below his flight path
something to hold and keep,
but nothing remained,

except the treasure
of his beauty
to seed my imagination
and renew my wonder.
Jolie

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Old 11-21-2007, 08:38 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Very beautiful.
I liked it.
A lot.
Beautiful imagery, leaving me with a sense of wonder.
And imagination :]
Thanks for it-*huggles*
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Old 11-30-2007, 04:54 AM   #3 (permalink)
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SIMPLY VERY BEAUTIFUL I love the image and vision I could see that Falcon circling and gliding on the wind excellent penning Jolie
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Old 12-04-2007, 11:13 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Thank you Anna and Bear,

Yes he is a beautiful bird. He comes around now and then, but every time he steals my attention. His fight is amazingly smooth. I love to watch him.
 

Old 12-22-2007, 03:35 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Very well written visual...they are majestic, aren't they? Well done!
 


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