Creative Traditional:

[Echoes]

laying
beneath moonglow
on blanket of green grass
counting falling stars, craving your
caress

[Harry]

very nice cinquain

one thing, how about "craving" instead of "longing"

just a thought, but I love this, your talent caresses my soul

[Echoes]

Hey Harry

thanks for the suggestion, read and nice comments, I will use "craving" I think it works better than "longing"

[erikestabrook]

good change craving is a very good word of desire,

I like this because it was serene too me and put me in a dreamy state
for a little while reflects good writing

[Storytime]

This is very nicely expressed! Good write!

[Echoes]

:word_thankyou: Erik, I appreciate the read and comments


:word_thankyou: Storytime

[erikestabrook]

yw lisa

[PaintedDiary]

Excellent, once again Echoes!!!!!

I think I will try my hand at a few later......

Painted

[Harry]

yeah "craving" works much better

[Echoes]

Hi Kim, thanks so much!

I hope you try them they are fun to write