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Old 08-08-2007, 07:25 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Nice frame PD, and nice poem PG...
my fav is:

A hushed forest watches in awe
 

Old 08-08-2007, 07:33 PM   #12 (permalink)
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The frame is beautiful! Thanks for your comment... appreciate you taking time to read my poem!
 

Old 08-08-2007, 09:05 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Hey now PG,

Great visuals throughout, but one word you used really set the poem in motion for me...

Actually, one word and the sentence: Hushed... "A hushed forest watches in awe"......

Damn, that's good... Nice write, thanx for sharin'.
 

Old 08-09-2007, 07:58 AM   #14 (permalink)
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Isn't funny how we have favorite words or certain words just sound better? ...one of my favorite words in lingering...does any of this make sense?
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