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Old 06-24-2007, 12:17 AM   #1 (permalink)
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3 haiku's for my favorite animal

grey shadow passes
the bump before bite occurs
freeze as terror stalks


membrane covers eyes
as razors sink into flesh
blood stains the water

unsuspecting prey
lightning quick surprise attack
death from below
 

Old 06-24-2007, 01:19 AM   #2 (permalink)
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hmm. i like the third one :]
Nice job!

perhaps some punctuation and capitalization would make it even more meaningful?

but nice wordmaking :]
"To the world you may be one person, but to one person, you may be the world"


omg omg omg!!! I say HUGGLES all the time...and....

ahh!! A HUGGLES SMILIE!!!!


 


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