Creative Traditional:

[TrueBlue]

-"World War Three"
Tales of World War III
Constitutes the spectacle
Signed with thier honor

-"Two Face"
Healing hands destroy
This siamese beast is man
Inseparably

-"Intolerance"
Everlasting man
Strength to be inflexible
A minimalist

-"Torment"
In parrallel worlds
Spirit and soul entangled
Like Adam before

-"Science of Transcience"
Elsewhere providence
All horizons are alike
In a foreign land

-"Passing"
Beautiful stanger
Inspiring me with desire
Cure me of this love

-"Denying Eden "
Dystopic stillness
The garden in which we've sown
Inverse reaction.

[MsJacquiiC]

WOW! I am impressed by the language in these pieces. There's a lot of anger I think - But never any bitterness - Just composition of bittered truth that you tell. Very interesting writes:

Tales of World War III
Constitutes the spectacle
Signed with thier honor

AND

In parrallel worlds
Spirit and soul entangled
Like Adam before

I'm interested in knowing how & why you came to write such thought provoking haikus... ALSO the 1st is very well constructed - It makes me think of someone who's quite complacent to let the chips fall where they may. And in that stance is some kind of Omnipotence of some sort!

Explanation please - But @ anyrate Thanx for sharing!
Very nice -

Jacquii.

[TrueBlue]

I wrote these haikus quite a long time ago now. Some of them I was making them out of a study device for a history course. Maybe that explains it a little. But maybe "to let the chips fall where they may. And in that stance is some kind of Omnipotence of some sort!" is sort of my disposition anyway. I am a pacifist at nature, so I often feel like an observer. They weren't all for school.

[LW Barker]

Your words are very interesting. Short and to the point, and yet inspiring