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Old 11-02-2007, 10:21 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Brother Wind is calling calling
Whispering within the air
Caressing fingers on our flesh
Flowing secrets in our hair

Mother Earth is humming humming
Crooning out a lullaby
As all her creatures wander home
To comforting waiting arms we lie

Sister Water singing singing
Sweet sweet songs of ice and snow
Pushing us to wander onward
To her fiery Father's glow.

Father Fire flickers flickers
Welcoming with merry laughter
Joining us in celebration
Lulling us to sleep hereafter.

Father, Mother, Sister, Brother
In their favor we find peace.
Now's the time when love and laughter
Come together in all beasts.

Join us now at the hearth
And listen to the tales we spin.
Drink our mead and eat our dinners
For soon our Spring will come again.
Vos Vestros Servate, mehos mihi linquite mores. "You keep to your own ways, and leave me to mine." ~ Sealiah
Trust in your heart. Trust in your Soul, and even if you go wrong, you'll know you did your best.
 

Old 11-02-2007, 10:34 PM   #2 (permalink)
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"Spirit sleeps in the mineral breathes in the vegetable dreams in the animal and wakes in man." as their saying goes.

Fine poem, Sealiah. Flows very nicely, good rhyme, and it captures the spirit of the Druid New Year well.

Thank you for a good read, Terence
 

Old 11-03-2007, 03:17 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I love the rhyming on this! It was a really awesome poem ^.^ The theme was unique, at least to me. I don't often read poems like this =D
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One Moment.
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Old 11-11-2007, 09:36 AM   #4 (permalink)
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well said, your repetition works well and the poem flowed very nicely.
 


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