Creative Traditional:

[mrsmajor]

I am flying, way up high, in the powder blue sky.
Maybe I will find myself among the puffy clouds.
Arms are well outstretched, and moving, fluttering, soaring.
So many Beautiful Birds flying along with me.
It is dark and silent here, not a sound can be heard.
One Bird stays close, as if leading me, I am not afraid.
With me every mile, does he think I am on of his?
I belong among them, flying high, so quietly.
With only my arms well outstretched, for I have no wings.
I open my eyes, It is quite misty, and still now.
And, I can hear, no more Birds are near, no sky to fly.


Hear is the key to finding the Title of this piece, it will be fun.
Take the 1st letter of the 1st line, 2nd letter of the 2nd line, 3rd letter of the 3rd line and advance one space in each line to the 11th and final line.
Put them all together and you have found the hidden Title of this piece.
This is called the "Poe Method" as Edgar Allan Poe first wrote one of these.
That's what I was told, by another writer... it is a lot of fun to write, and can go as many lines as the writer wishes.

[KayaOtah]

Nice kind of poetry, the title is..

I AM A DREAMER

[mrsmajor]

There are so many options to this form, you could use names, or just about any message you want.

It is just a bit of fun, but of course the poem has to make sense too, that is where a little time has to be spent.

I am glad you enjoyed the piece.

Thanks for taking the time.

[KayaOtah]

Yeah, I made one too, gonna post it up next time, but mine is a little different,
to take first letter of first line, second letter of second line, third letter of third line
to hard for me, so I made to take first letter of first word of first line,
first letter of second word of second line,first letter of third word of third line.
If possible, I'll try make it first letter of first word of first line, second letter of second word
of second line.. so on... That would be a hard challenge...
anyway, again, good poem.

[mrsmajor]

That's good, I will be looking forward to yours, it is not hard though, it just takes a little time to get it together. Once you do one you will see what I mean.

[KayaOtah]

I manage to do it... my work can be viewed at >> http://jpicforum.info/miscellaneous/...html#post24124 << One more time, thanks for the inspiration and i love your poem.
*smiles*