08-06-2006, 03:29 PM
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Re: Hope
Dear King,
WOW!!!! Loving the acrostic structured format first of all!!!! The words you choose are always symetrical, always parallel, always building upon one another until the perfect fractal appears! Hope is something quite different to me now, after reading this. The creativity that you possess is masterful. As I have said before, I will be at your book signing!!!! The last two stanzas, if you will....
Healing the abrasions rooted by doubt
Obtaining a sensation that impacts like a deep emotion
Possessing the power of an idea that can intrigue any type of personality
Exotic in appearence like beauty of a blooming flower
In spite of things you may hear,
Hope is the definition of hope...
are incredible. I have this thing for reading poems backwards also, and reverse is just as aesthetic as descending. King, what can I say...YOU DID IT AGAIN!!! Can I be one of the first people to get your book? LOL!!! LOVED IT KING!! I now know what HOPE really is. Much Luv'...
Painted aka Kim
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