12-01-2007, 11:54 PM
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Re: If I were a Poet
Ooo - I must have missed this scribe SALLY - but I must say I like your rhyme scheme, your iambic pentameter (( if in fact it is pentameter... )) makes me think of jingles from way back when ---- One of my favorite movies of all time is Corrina Corrina with Whoopi Goldberg and Ray Liota... In the movie, Ray's character is given credit for having invented the Jello jingle of long-ago, only he had Whoopi's help and in the movie she mentions the principle of iambic pentameter ---- At anyrate - 'tis a good movie = 'tis a nice jingle of a poem = I like it! = Thanx for the share!
Jacquii.
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