Creative Traditional:

[Sally Roberts]

if i were a poet
i'd blend you within
the earliest kisses
of spring,
where lilacs and roses
intwined into love
and dew drops
forever will cling.

if i were a poet
i'd kidnap you
and change all the stars
into verses,
collect your emotions,
with meter and rhyme
and sonnets
my heart
still rehearses.

if i were a poet

[Terence]

Hi Sally,

I'm not usually very effusive when responding but this is a really beautiful write.

There are certainly no if's about you being a poet.

Terence

[Sally Roberts]

Thank You Terence:

I am honored by your words. It's poets like you and your comments that keep poets like me inspired to write.

Thank You, Thank You. I'm greatly appreciated

Blessings

[nomadicrhymer]

Sally, if you were a poet, I'd lay bunches of roses at your feet...if you were a poet indeed...very funny...but airy and light...great beat.

Nomad

[Sally Roberts]

Bless you Nomad:

Your comments are warm and sunny like the first morning sun on the forest floor. Thanks for the roses at my feet. I am truely grateful

Blessings

[Jer4clarity]

Sally,

Well since you are a poet and I'm your friend I get to hang out in this poem. Delightful!

Jerry

[Sally Roberts]

Thank You Dear Friend Jer:

Your comments are worth a million smiles. ect.. ect.. ect..

Blessings

[ladylyric]

Wow....this was an amazing read..I swear I'm batting 1000 today.. I truly believe the one who has created this "peace" right here is INDEED a poet..this was such a beautiful ode to poetry, love, and someone special...equivocal and yet direct all in one, yet never losing the softness in your words...this is beautiful

"and change all the stars
into verses,
collect your emotions,
with meter and rhyme
and sonnets
my heart
still rehearses."

Those were my favorite line....I'm in love with this "peace"

Poetic Love to you because love of poetry is in you....
Thanks so much for sharing this piece of art...definitely hanging this one on my heart

[Sally Roberts]

Thank You my dear Lady:

Peace I give unto you. I love to bring out the beauty in my poetry that will make readers like yourself bring about loving smiles and warming hearts. Thank you for your most welcomed comment.


Blessings

[Kit Carson]

If I were a poet
I'ld send it back
to you in ryhme
but since I'm just
an old sailor
i'll put a message in
a bottle and toss it adrift


Already in my favorites my friend, you have remarkable talent!