Creative Traditional:

[Kit Carson]

If you find a wishing well

deep within a forest green

where elves and fairies dwell

but are very seldom seen


Deep within a forest green

ancient fables are held

but are very seldom seen

drifting for the mind to meld


Ancient fables are held

where dreams are set free

drifting for the mind to meld

believe what you can not see


Where dreams are set free

where elves and fairies dwell

believe what you can not see

if you find a wishing well


mjcarson
7-1-2007

[Checkmate]

i know i commented on it on 360...but i read it again here and enjoyed it again...just love the visions brought while reading it.

[mangodroplet]

I like it, Nice use of pantoum!
I LOVE this style
Great Job!

[KayaOtah]

How I wish I could find a wishing well... that is 100% working..

[Jer4clarity]

Mike,

The pantoum is no so easy to pen...You've done a wonderful job and painted such a great picture as well.

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The Following Text Is Quoted:

Where dreams are set free

where elves and fairies dwell

believe what you can not see

if you find a wishing well

Jerry

[louisianagal529]

i love reading ur poems.. this poem brought me immediately to a world of mythical dreams.

beautiful imagery! and very nice rhyme and rhythm

[Echoes]

great job, a fine example of this form

[Kit Carson]

Thank you all. What do all of you have in common? You are young or young at heart. We don't have to throw away fantasy as we grow up! We just need to keep it real. Andre Norton and J.R.R. Tolkien and Lewis Carrol all speak to me as well now as they did when I was young.