Creative Traditional:

[papasan22]

Remove me from the lens of sin,
that I might see thy grace within.

Tear me from the view of two,
that ALL may come to sup with you.

Shred the painful lie of error
as I find grace within the terror.

Surrendered to the fact that ALL
in truest form before the fall
has led us to thy holy feast
to dine within our Christed beast.

I say to you in words of truth
judge not the cloak or dragons tooth.

For mysteries logic has no face
whilst mind enslaves the human race
To know, one has to truly taste.
To see one has to Know no waste.

My prayer then lord is thanks to Thee
for ALL the things you bring to me.

From double edged sword of my creation
To quickened cells of pure elation.

Remove me from the lens of sin
so I might see the truth within.

I Love Me Love You Love ALL…
Mark


Written by Mark Roske
Copyright 2007

[Jer4clarity]

Mark,

Ah! The lens of sin doth keep us all captured by is haze upon the truth. Thanks for sharing!

My Fav:

The Following Text Is Quoted:

emove me from the lens of sin,
that I might see thy grace within.

Jerry

[MsJacquiiC]

Hey MARK and welcome to the JPiC Community!
If you haven't done so thus far - feel free to introduce yourself via the Member Introductions section

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Very nice poem - the rhythm is very nice - the meter of your poem is right on point - the unforced rhyme works rather well actually - The substance of your poem: AMAZING.

Talk of spiritual faith:

The Following Text Is Quoted:

From double edged sword of my creation
To quickened cells of pure elation.

Interesting stanza - then talk of dragon's tooth... Nice effect - Has a mystical quality amid the spiritualesqu.

A very nice 1st share - Thanx.

Jacquii.

[Sally Roberts]

Mark:
Welcome to the forum!
Lovely poem. Mythical creatures are always great to read about. Especially dragons! Mythology is one of my favorite things to read. Your poem is awesome. I really enjoyed it.
btw. I absolutely love the pic of your beautiful breathtaking chakra colors.
I look forward in reading more of your work.

Blessings

[papasan22]

Thank you all for your wonderful comments, I feel very welcome Here~!~~!~!
Peace@Love,
PenDragon

[Kit Carson]

Mark,
Welcome to JCIP! That's a whale of a poem to start with! I look forward to seeing more and love Jimi. I find that so many people concentrate on his guitar and music and forget how mighty his voice and words were. Total package ripped from us too soon. I look forward to your words.
Peace