Creative Traditional:

[Aste]

Life is a game
In which all that we do
Is go from problem to problem
From pursue to review

We conquer each challenged
Presented with more
We fight through the obstacles
We Battle the war

Yet presented with love
We follow it blind
Knowing it fruitless
Our mind re-aligned

Though the concept not foreign
To thoughts of remorse
It fetches no more victory
Then that of brute force

For this game that we’re playing
We can’t ever win
We can only find solace
In our thoughts forged within


Inspired by the book 1984, Because I'm reading it. I love it. It is amazing. o.o

[nomadicrhymer]

Very well written and there is very good follow through on the concept...good work!!

Nomad

[JolieH]

Victoria,
In a way, the message in this is like I've often said to you, life is the most challenging video game you will ever play. If you spent as much time with your schoolwork as with some of the video games, you'd be a big winner in your future life. I've seen how determind you kids can be to conquer a game. I hope you find as much determination for you future career. You have the mind and talent already.

Geate work, and I plan to read that book too.