Love's Requiem - Poetry in Color Forum
Register Members List JPiC Blogs Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read JPiC Newsletter

Go Back   Poetry in Color Forum > Poetic Colours > Creative Traditional
JPiC Forum Chatbox
Chatbox Disabled For Your Usergroup...
* You must be logged in to view and use the JPiC Chatbox!
Recent JPiC Forum Posts
Newest Announcements/Admin Notes
 

Love's Requiem

Thread Information: This thread has 2 replies and has been viewed 293 times
 
Social Bookmarks Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 09-09-2007, 10:58 PM   #1 (permalink)
Misunderstood
Aumakua's Avatar
Name: Riha
Last Online:
02-16-2008 09:10 PM
Default Love's Requiem Aumakua Started This Thread
Bleeding, crying, screaming,
Clawing your way up the wall,
With nothing more than bloody hands,
Anytime you’re doomed to fall,

Wide, frightened eyes,
Quickened breath and blood drenched skin,
Cowering in the corner,
Love’s requiem within,

Tears of distress,
Falling down your cheeks,
Pain, suffering, and sadness,
That you’ve bundled up for weeks,

Streaks of red,
Highlight your room,
Iron scented atmosphere,
Foreshadowing your doom,

Steady flow of blood,
Quivering at your fingertips,
Drawing out a self portrait,
Of the blood that drips,

Instead of slowing, your heart beats faster,
Losing control of your nerves,
Rusted razorblade missing its target,
Your arm is covered with accidental curves,

One last time, against the wall,
Tainted hair a crimson shade,
Ripped shirt, holey pants,
Inside depression is like a raid,

Fight it, Fight it; Pupils dilating,
Trembling and shivering become inevitable,
The reality all surges to you at once,
Your hair becomes just another thing to pull,

Going crazy? A feeling of lost sanity,
The silence you once befriended is now breaking you,
Sharper than the daggers that pierced your heart,
Severed, its pieces lay two,

Still clawing you try to understand,
How tonight ended up like this,
Blood shot eyes blurring,
In this nightmare you reminisce,

The sky turns jet-black,
The foreshadowing element takes its play,
Like a well written mystery,
You follow deaths way,

Piercing screams echo on the silent wind,
The howling reflection of the jet-black sky on the lake,
It’s as if every living thing had vanished,
Or maybe in deaths realm you have awake,

Still trembling, you lay lifelessly,
Jet-black snow falling from paradise,
Snow falling on you as if a shield,
Until your immortal soul will again rise.
POETS
One Thought.
One Moment.
Endless Possibilities.

 

Old 09-10-2007, 11:46 AM   #2 (permalink)
Moon Goddess of Whispers
Moonchild's Avatar
Name: Karen Davies
Last Online:
05-27-2008 10:16 PM
Default Re: Love's Requiem
Wow...this is torturous!
Very vivid and detailed and I can
relate to some of it. Awesome write, enjoyed


Nightlife calls me.
Through her I am free.
It's the only way to be,
all caught up in a mystery!
Born with full moon fever,
I can make you a believer!
For I am the moonchild,
truly born to be wild!
 

Old 09-15-2007, 12:35 AM   #3 (permalink)
Misunderstood
Aumakua's Avatar
Name: Riha
Last Online:
02-16-2008 09:10 PM
Default Re: Love's Requiem Aumakua Started This Thread
Yay, glad you enjoyed it ^^

Dark poems are awsome xO
 


JPiC Portal > Main Forum Index > Poetic Colours > Creative Traditional

Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are Off
Refbacks are Off



Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
LOVE'S VERITY Visionary Creative Traditional 2 07-16-2007 12:05 PM
Love's Echo Bear Creative Traditional 5 03-08-2007 02:06 PM
Love's shore erikestabrook Emotional Romantic 4 01-20-2007 10:09 AM
Love's labour erikestabrook Emotional Romantic 2 12-13-2006 03:10 PM
Emancipation (Requiem: September 11, 2001) MsJacquiiC Miscellaneous 2 08-31-2006 04:55 PM
Navigation
All times are GMT -4. The time now is 10:17 PM.
GreetingsGalleryOnline.com

Powered by vBulletin® gets JPiCans scribing.
Copyright ©2000 - 2012, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Some Custom Pages Using vBAdvanced CMPS