Creative Traditional:

[Jer4clarity]

Mars

It winks at us, an owl-eye hung in black,
coming back for the young,

who will tell a tale of bright summer stars,
and where Mars might come from.


Jerry P. Quinn © September 3, 2003

[Sally Roberts]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Jer4clarity

Mars

It winks at us, an owl-eye hung in black,
coming back for the young,

who will tell a tale of bright summer stars,
and where Mars might come from.


Jerry P. Quinn © September 3, 2003

Jer: Yes, The mighty red planet seems to wink at us at times. The imagery in your poem was right on. Star gazing is so addictive and full of wonderous questions.
Thanks for the GREAT read.

Blessings

[Jer4clarity]

Sally,

I wrote this poem the night that Mars was supposed to be as close as it will get in my lifetime. thanks for checking it out! so do you know what a toddair byr is?


Jerry

[Sally Roberts]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Jer4clarity

Sally,

I wrote this poem the night that Mars was supposed to be as close as it will get in my lifetime. thanks for checking it out! so do you know what a toddair byr is?


Jerry

toddair byr? Can't say that I do. Please enlighten me.

Thanks