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Old 05-27-2007, 07:11 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I know I have made some mistakes.
I know i have problems to deal with.
Dealing with the pressures of society.
And the way my mind is going.
It may seem that I'm going crazy.
That I'm losing my head.
i'm hearing noises,
From both sides,
Trying to set me straight.
But they are not helping me.
All I see is people giving me opinions.
Making my condition worse.
But I am starting to see things,
In a different light.
They can not get rid of it.
And it can not leave on their own.
the only person,
who can put control in this situation is,
ME!
 

Old 05-28-2007, 03:31 AM   #2 (permalink)
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fabiola,

This is a good
message, to your
self and for others.

You are showing
us your inner
strengths.

Great.

Thanks for the
read.
 

Old 05-28-2007, 06:34 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Excellent poem, thanks for sharing
 

Old 05-28-2007, 05:34 PM   #4 (permalink)
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thank you very much..blushing.
 


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