Creative Traditional:

[LynnEllen]

Could it be the distant moon
That sweetens the night
That softens the slight
Of daylight?

Or is it the moonlight
That softens my heart
That coddles the start
Of insight?

Moon, in sky, remains objective;
Moonlight: intimate, reflective.

Moon and moonlight,
Silver lining, faithful friend.

One over my shoulder
One on my skin.

[Moonchild]

I like the observation of this.
Creative and well thought out.
Really enjoyed! Great write all around!
Welcome to PIC, hope to read more from you

[Terence]

Hi Lynn Ellen, welcome to JPIC. A very, very nice intro from you. This flows extremely well and has much meaning. Great write.

Terence

[Lindamay]

Love the way you set up the words for the separation of "light"

[LynnEllen]

Thanks, all, for the kind words and observations. I appreciate your appreciation

May your pens forever flow with ease and eloquence.