Creative Traditional:

[TrueBlue]

-"By Definition"
Circular reason
A fair representation
This aspect of man

-"Touch"
In the listening hour
Exchanged, uneasy glances
I feel not afraid

-"Suicide Girl"
Lips still touched with fire
The last night that she ever lived
- Dying was painful

-"Agoraphobia"
Life in a vacuum
Invisible things hiding
Artificial light.

-"Progress"
Future universe
The apple without the worm
The infinite dream

-"The Makings of a Tragedy"
Tragicomedy
Increasing numbers
Fat man with a gun

-"Industry"
By definition
In the sum of human effort
The doubly processed

- "Beautiful and Naked"
Industry classes -
With the advent of modern
Naked interest

-"Revolution Dreamers"
Proletariat
Constantly growing, unite -
To lose but their chains!

-"A Moment of Shock"
Abolish marriage!
Dowries prostitute women!!!
A union in love?!!

[PaintedDiary]

More fabulous haikus TruBlue!!!! Keep writing!!

[MsJacquiiC]

Nice writing PAUL or PABLO or TRUEBLUE LOL - Which do you prefer?
Anyway this is a really nice compilation of haiku. It's like each piece is a section of the same film - A series of pictures that make up one cartoon - ya know? It's like the artist has drawn a series of pictures on index cards that when you flip those cards in succession you'll see a little motion picture.

Very interesting film you've created!
Thanx for sharing it!

Jacquii.

ps - the style reminds me of one of
my own favorite poems ---->
Check it out and see what you
think about it - anxious to know
your opinion: Passion Murmurs