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Old 06-16-2007, 11:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Mother Nature’s Melody
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As I walk to the lush green meadow
A full moon guides me to a tall oak tree
That I decide to sit underneath
I close my eyes and listen,
To natures tranquil comforting melodies
~
The meadow is silent at first
As nature arranges it’s special song,
The silence is soon broken
With a sweet aria of the nightingales
~
Then a gentle refreshing breeze
Rustles the leaves of the giant tree
And the soothing hum of the grass
Accompanies in this special tune
And delicately whispers listen to me
~
A beaver pounding its tail adds a rhythm to a very special song
Joining in bull frogs tone adds a voice to the melody
Next the streams adds a sound like the tickling of the pianos keys
As water surges over stones in the meandering stream
~
Listening to the concert that nature is singing to me
The most magnificent majestic melody
I am refreshed as I soak up this magical tune
I see the beauty of nature
Not the smog, the filth or gloom of the city

As I lay on a carpet of lush grass
Safely cradling my spirit gently within its grasp
As my eyes grow heavy as mother nature sings
She whispers feel my strength enter you

I awaken to the brilliance of glittering stars
I am refreshed and my mind is restored
I have learned when my spirit and soul are exhausted
All I have to do is listen to Mother Nature’s Melody


 

Old 06-22-2007, 02:10 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Dear Bear:

As a Mother Nature lover myself I fell in love with your words. The depth had taken me deep into the wooodland of the forest where you captured the essence of the land and feelings of nature. The imagery is flawless. Awesome write.

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Honor the old ones in deed and name
let love and light be our guides again.
 

Old 06-22-2007, 02:54 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Bear,

It's almost like you take me camping when you write this kind of nature work. Awesome! I was there!

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A beaver pounding its tail adds a rhythm to a very special song
Joining in bull frogs tone adds a voice to the melody
Next the streams adds a sound like the tickling of the pianos keys
As water surges over stones in the meandering stream
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Old 06-22-2007, 04:36 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Sally thank you for your magnificent comment I always try to make the reader feel as if they are there listening seeing and feeling nature in it's most beautiful state.
hugs kisses
bear
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Jerry thank you for your wonderful comment I'm very happy that your enjoyed and felt that you were camping out glad I was able to put that image into your mind
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