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[Bear]

Beautiful penning Painted but also sad when two lovers slowly break apart like the two broken dancers of the music box. awesome heart breaking poem
hugs kisses
bear

[deep_poet86]

I love this one so much, esspecially the ending, awesome read PaintedDiary!

[PaintedDiary]

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Originally Posted by Curtis Spider Lee

I will hope for tomorrow
but for now
the figures kiss (Good Bye)
but never kiss (Hello)

Wow... I love this poem you wrote some time ago! I think it's an awesome write and needs to be seen again! Yes!! This one feeding on this one as it as fallen into my web and I'm feeding again!! Nice Write!!![/QUOTE]

Hey Spidy ,

Thank you sooo much for bringing this back! That was so sweet of you. Better watch that web, gettin heavy in there! LOLOL Love you lil brother!

{{{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}}}

[mangodroplet]

Wow very nice!
Hmm...there's always a way when there's a will...

how did they fall in love again?

[stardust]

Dear Kim (Ms. Painted Diary): OH!! I love the title, so all the words. It is a bit sad, but lovely in all its contents. I was reading all the reviews, and I realized that all came out good in the end. Well, it is so good after all!! Lovely Poem, sweetheart!! Thank you for sharing your sweet talents with us!! Hugs. Fondly, Starry.

[Jer4clarity]

Kim,

Your ability to use the poets pallet and brush is exceptional.

You set the visual stage

The Following Text Is Quoted:

What happened to the music box
two figures spinning in love
weathered strings
play a dying melody
for you were
the best part of me

you open the curtain

The Following Text Is Quoted:

The music box
only opens half way
the other half
closes more and more
each day

and tell your story

The Following Text Is Quoted:

I will hope for tomorrow
but for now
the figures kiss (Good Bye)
but never kiss (Hello)

The first five lines are my favorites!


Jerry

[butchiesmom]

I've heard of but haven't seen, in person, that music box.
I read your poem and was touched by the wistful thoughts.
Really beautiful!
Gail

[PaintedDiary]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by butchiesmom

I've heard of but haven't seen, in person, that music box.
I read your poem and was touched by the wistful thoughts.
Really beautiful!
Gail

Dear Gail,

Thank you so much for taking precious time to read and to comment. (Let alone all the things you are helping me with! ). It makes me misty to read that you were touched, and I am most honored sis. Then I know, I am on the right track. Love Ya!

Kim