My Fairest Love ~ Sonnet

Moonchild · 05-03-2008, 07:52 AM

MY FAIREST LOVE ~ SONNET

There lies a simple love within mine heart,
Where wealth could never damage nor despoil.
A place where fairest beauty plays her part,
Where trust is built upon pure Eden’s soil.

The dark of yesterday no longer blinds.
Thine eyes now leadeth me into the light.
The dawning of tomorrow brightly shines.
No ghouls nor demons teeth again can bite.

The hand of love caressed my aging face,
Where yesterday no man would dare to touch.
Mine heart once beat within a bitter place,
But through the years I’ve grown to love so much.

Oh fairest love, behold my bleeding heart.
Within your hands a rose’s thorns depart.

© Karen Davies

Abae · 05-04-2008, 04:08 AM

Tender is the night
which takes my lady to flight
holding hearts in skies blue
twinkling beauty upon my dew.

'Tis my smile that reflects
within your eye with no regrets
to hold you there forever more
healing lonelinesses ugly scar.

Thanks for the read.

Moonchild · 05-04-2008, 07:18 AM

You're welcome and thanks for reading Abae

JolieH · 05-13-2008, 12:52 PM

Since my first sonnet, I've really come to appreciate this form. They're a little difficult to write but well worth the effort.
This is just beautiful Karen.

Moonchild · 05-13-2008, 10:32 PM

Thank you Jolie

I've written over 300 now and I plan to write
lots more. I love the Sonnet form!

Bear · 05-22-2008, 06:26 PM

Amazing and wonderful penning Moonchild when written with the love you have and in the right concept make it truly an amazing write I love this poem
hugs kisses
tom

Moonchild · 05-23-2008, 11:36 AM

Thanks for reading me Tom

Glad you love it!

Bear · 05-23-2008, 01:36 PM

i was spellbound by it moonchild simply amazingly beautiful
hugs kisses
Bear

Moonchild · 05-23-2008, 03:03 PM

Thank you Tom.
That was nice of you to come
back on and say that*hugs&kisses*
It means a lot.

SuzyQ · 06-24-2011, 06:52 PM

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Moonchild

I've written over 300 now and I plan to write
lots more. I love the Sonnet form!

This is a beautifully written sonnet. Perfect in form and rhyme and message as well. Knowing now how many you've written, no wonder it's so perfect. whew :-)

I enjoyed this a bunch... thanks.

SuzyQ