Creative Traditional:

[Sally Roberts]

Kim:
Thanks for your kind words. I always love they way you express yourself with the most splendid comments. Just like your poetry and short stories. They are always a joy to read. I sit humbled Thank you.

Blessings

[nomadicrhymer]

Sally, this is a beautiful work of art! I love the subject because I feel that it's the most important in our lives today...for those of us who have freedom as well as those who don't...we either want to keep it, or we want to attain it. Still, nothing is free like most of nature that surrounds us...I feel that in this poem one is longing for that height of freedom...and reading it takes us there and we, along with you, yearn for the feeling of being absolutely free.

Fabulous write!

Nomad

[MsJacquiiC]

Hi MS SALLY - I like this poem - a lot actually - And it's something that everyone can relate to - in one way or another... I like poems about embracing freedom... Your poem has a hint of sadness in it though, as if that freedom is just out of reach by the tiniest of margins.... The last lines speak volumes:

The Following Text Is Quoted:

If only
my wishes
would really come true,
I would have
my freedom
today.

Ah yes!

Today I dream that tomorrow
freedom will embrace me
in her warm arms and together
we fly away.

I like the rhythm of your poem as well - the meter is quite lovely and makes for a light breezy read - Enjoyable poem SALLY - Thanx for the sharing!

Jacquii.