Creative Traditional:

[mangodroplet]

Quiet despairing
flows into the empty sky
one single wail.

[Jeez]

First ' got an
image of this
lone person, the
last native.

Then there was
the lone voice in
the crowded,
world.

Heard above all
others.

And then...

Anyhoo..


for the read.

[mangodroplet]

Thanks Jeez.
:]
Thanks for the images....

i love haikus, because you have to pack the most meaning into seemingly almost nothing.

[Bear]

great image and voice Mango,
hugs kisses
bear

[mangodroplet]

Thanks Bear!
*huggles*
:]

[Altree94]

Now THAT is a BEAUTIFUL Haiku and one that I can really relate to!!!!!!!
THANK-YOU Mango Puppy!!!!
Love,
Tree.

[MsJacquiiC]

Hey MS MANGO - this is a sad and lonely write - but also evocative and you're correct about the haiku - so much meaning, never a word wasted.

Interesting thing about this haiku is that this is exactly how I feel at this very moment. But who'd care to listen and hear the one wail?

Nice write.
Thanx for the sharing.

Jacquii.

[mangodroplet]

Tree-thanks :] Glad it fit haiku

MsJ-the thing is....that there are some who will hear that one, lonely wail....I will, if you ever need it. And yes...Haiku is a beautiful thing. :]
perhaps.....that one lonely wail can be the beginning of music....of perhaps a sad melody that evolves to something greater....

[¤Me¤]

BEAUTIFUL

[PaintedDiary]

Ms Mango,

Very beautifully crafted haiku, with all the lush elements one could feel and / or envision. Outstanding! Simply exquisite in the imagery and the melancholy feel. Love this!

Kim