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Old 05-13-2007, 05:29 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Nature’s Gift

Walking outside into the misty morning air,
Succumbing to the spell of azure skies
Dawn’s shadow dances across emerald green lawn,
In contrast with the glimmering sun’s mystifying veil
Sparkling misty dew is radiant in the morning breeze
And is glistening on the gardens morning glories and roses
Casting a glittering, rainbow hue
~
Dancing yellow, blue, orange butterflies,
Yellow and black bumblebees, colorful hummingbirds
And the translucent rainbow tint wings of dragonflies,
whirling, twirling, swirling from flower to flower,
In the trees the birds sing an endless song in concert
With the crickets’ chirp, the buzzing of the bees,
Dragonflies and the hum of the hummingbirds
~

Precious are the beautiful days of summer
Radiating tranquility and peaceful joy,
Spirit soars in wonder at the touch
Of Nature’s magnificent gift
Resurrecting the weary heart,
The whispering breeze a miracle
Of nature radiant soul

Soft raindrops the mystical kiss,
That gives impassioned bliss,
The caress of a gentle breeze
And the concert of all living things
Are Nature’s ultimate gift…


 

Old 05-13-2007, 06:32 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Dear Bear,

I cannot quote without quoting the entire poem!!! OMG this is sooooooo beautiful and I want this poem for me!!!!!! You have outdone yourself in this piece, as I am in awe of your Beautiful Nature Canvas Poems as well as your Beautiful Romantic Poetry. God has certainly blessed you with the soul of the muse of Nature and Romance. We are so blessed to have you here with us at JPiC Bear. Much Love!

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Old 05-13-2007, 11:12 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thank you so much Kim for your great comments I am so happy you love my writings
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Old 05-14-2007, 02:23 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Wonderful work, Tom!
This whole poem radiates joy and peace - truly uplifting!
TY for sharing it with us!
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Old 05-14-2007, 02:43 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Thank you so much Altree for the wonderful comment
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Old 05-14-2007, 10:27 AM   #6 (permalink)
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wow, this is so wonderful that i actually can feel it, it was written very wonderfully !
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Old 05-14-2007, 11:23 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Kaya thank you so much for your wonderful comment I am so happy that you felt as if you were there when reading it
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Old 05-14-2007, 11:27 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment
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Old 05-14-2007, 07:39 PM   #9 (permalink)
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This is a wonderful piece of poetry - I always love poems that give tribute and respect to nature AND this piece you've shared TOM is just light, colorful & vibrant:

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Soft raindrops the mystical kiss,
That gives impassioned bliss,
The caress of a gentle breeze
And the concert of all living things
Are Nature’s ultimate gift…
The last stanza quoted above is just wonderful to me. "the concert of all living things" is wonderfully worded. I enjoyed this poem very much - Thanx for sharing it with us

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Old 05-15-2007, 06:22 PM   #10 (permalink)
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What a beautiful piece of writing, You have used much imagery in this piece, bringing to the reader so much of what glorious summer days offer.

There is nothing that I would even think of changing, It was my pleasure to read and review.Thanks so much for sharing..
 


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