Paint

Kit Carson · 06-26-2007, 11:39 AM

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Paint
brush strokes
color life
mona lisa smiles
at the blue dutch man's scream
while God above touches man
"great art belongs to all mankind"
mjcarson
6-26-2007

Checkmate · 06-26-2007, 02:38 PM

cool post my friend...is this one of the clarity pyramids...if so, i must try my hand at it...i see you have taken a liking to this form...you appear to be mastering it...thanks for sharing.

PaintedDiary · 07-18-2007, 01:29 PM

Beautiful depiction and metaphor Kit...loved this also as I do all your work.

Kim

Kit Carson · 07-18-2007, 05:15 PM

Thanks Scott and Kim. This one was fun to do. In the story section:
mona lisa smiles
at the blue dutch man's scream
while God above touches man
I managed to work 5 great artists in: DaVinci,Picasso,Rembrandt,Munch, and Michelangelo
Not an easy task with only 18 syllables!

JolieH · 07-19-2007, 09:31 AM

This is nice Mike. What are these poems called? I missed that post, and what is the formula?

Kit Carson · 07-19-2007, 09:06 PM

Thanks Jolie. This is a Clarity Pyramid. It was originated by Jerry Quinn, one of our members. There should be a definition in the poetic form section and maybe link to Jery's page or find him in the chat room.