Creative Traditional:

[Terence]

PEACE
freedom
state of rest

fragile conception
ultimately achieved
by dauntless men of strong faith

“compromised by politicians”

[mangodroplet]

interesting....the type of peace you're looking for is world peace...but it starts with inner peace...and yeah. not many politicians have that, BUT they're the ones ruling this world and trying to make it get along.

the second to last line and the last line go hand in hand, as you need men of strong faith, but many times...politicians aren't that, and the thought of peace is very much compromised.

very nice!

[Terence]

Hi Anna, I'm pleased you appreciated this, it was also entered in the Call for Submission thread. I was aiming for the duality of War and Death tangentially through the vehicle of Peace. I'm not sure I've fully reached that goal but I thank you for your thoughts.

Terence

[Mysty]

WOW Terence .......... that truly needs to be graffitied EVERYWHERE...... Awesome write and so true. I love this one.

~Mysty~

[Terence]

Thanks for stopping by and commenting, Mysty. I'm pleased my words struck a chord with you, (not sure about the graffiti though).

Terence