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Old 08-10-2007, 02:10 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Buildings tower now
Like egos of selfish men
Looking down on us.

Nicholas J. Sosa ©2007


 

Old 08-11-2007, 10:50 AM   #2 (permalink)
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This is a thought provoking Haiku – a lot of images and implication.
I think you are so right.
 

Old 08-11-2007, 08:03 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Intricate Soul,

I love the meaningful impact in your brevity of words!

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Old 08-11-2007, 10:35 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Dear Nicholas,

It its brevity rings truth and power. This is awesome! Loved it! Many thoughts, many images painted strong on a small canvas. An excellent rating! Also, great to see your work again! Thank you for posting!

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Old 08-11-2007, 10:43 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Thank you Jolie and Jer for commenting, I like this one too. I see that progress of my country also has adverse affects. You guys live in the US alot of gigantic buildings there I hesitate to imagine.... God Bless
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Old 08-11-2007, 10:47 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Kim, thank you so much for commenting as well. I've been writing a few Haiku lately, maybe I'll post a few more, maybe..
 

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