Creative Traditional:

[JolieH]

Regardless


I will follow you,
without misgiving,
climb close behind,
even if you don't realize I'm there,
even if you shove me back
at times unknowing.
~
I'll climb with you
to the mountian top.
Despite the pain, I will endure
despite the fear, I'll be there too,
counting petals on wildflowers.
~
Win or lose our hearts
will not break. They will
only grow in wisdom
understanding from what
dedication shares with our spirits,
~
What this climb teaches us,
outweighs any punches,
for without it, one can never truly know
what this is all about.

[Mohammad Ilyas]

A decisive writing, I think the word is lose and not loose in the stanza. A nice thought.

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by JolieH

Win or loose our hearts
will not break. They will
only grow in wisdom
understanding from what
dedication shares with our spirits,

[Mysty]

Hi Jolie ......

despite the couple of misspellings this poem shows that there is a more positive way to look at things during tough times. It is a message of hope and endurance promising an answer at the end of it all. I hope that one would not have to endure the physical hits though such a journey though.

Other mistake is outweighs.... but despite those two errors hon your meaning was clear and I quite enjoyed this. Thanks Jolie



Mysty

[JolieH]

Lol,lol
thanks for the encouragment. Thanks for the help on editing...