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Old 04-22-2007, 04:46 PM   #1 (permalink)
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The Rose
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Nature’s most enchanting object I've ever seen
Is the simple beauty of the Rose
It’s petals of multitude colors and a stem of green
And thorns of brown, fills this majestic flower
With a gentle elegance and a fiery, protective love
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It’s the only flower in nature to have a beautiful maze as it’s shape
It’s fragrance is so phenomenal, As it fills the air
The white rose is like a string of lustrous pearls
The red rose is brilliant and powerful, yet feels as soft as velvet.
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So if your lover is like a beautiful rose,
Treat her gently, because like a rose
She is very delicate and fragile
And always tell her how much you love her
As you hand her a beautiful Red Rose.
 

Old 04-28-2007, 09:23 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Very nice write, Tom!
I have to argue with your last stanza though -
Even us delicate and fragile roses have big nasty thorns to watch out for! LOL!
Love your last two lines - think I'll print them out and
pin them to my hubby's pillow!
TY for sharing!
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Old 04-28-2007, 10:29 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and yes all men know that a woman is dangerous like the thorns on a rose lol
hugs kisses
tom
 

Old 04-28-2007, 10:33 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Dear Bear,

What can I say? You did it again. This is going into my favorites file, getting a 5 "PD" Purple Dot Rating, and another beautiful review. This was exquisite, beautifully executed, aesthetically appealing, and so you! The rose I did at the top is for you from me. I will print out, and just hope I get a rose Ms Tree, LOL! Bear, please continue to write your beautiful poems, as I need my Bear fix often! LOL Love Ya!

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Old 04-28-2007, 10:43 PM   #5 (permalink)
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thank you so much I have just submitted a new one tonight and working on another I am so happy you enjoy them and get your Bear fix anytime you want one
hugs kisses
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Ohhhh yes and thank you for the lovely rose
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