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RUSTIC MOON - Haiku

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12-15-2006, 07:00 AM

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VERSION 1

rustic moon shadow
winter snow piling on roof
hot cocoa in mug

VERSION 2

rustic moon shadow
hot cocoa steaming in mug
snow piling on roof

Last edited by Echoes; 12-17-2006 at 01:49 AM.

12-15-2006, 03:00 PM	#2 (permalink)
Harry Member Name: Harry Last Online: 07-08-2007 05:50 AM	Re: RUSTIC MOON - Haiku Love this one Lisa, it is so visually described, very nice work indeeed catch up with you later

12-15-2006, 03:16 PM	#3 (permalink)
PaintedDiary JPiC Senior Moderator Extraordinaire Name: Kimberly Gender: Location: Channeling Rainbow PaintedDiary's Mood: Last Online: Yesterday 11:05 PM	Re: RUSTIC MOON - Haiku LOVED IT!!!!! Got any more chocolate for me and Harry? Lol!!!! Fantabulous!!!! Painted

12-15-2006, 07:48 PM	#4 (permalink)
Echoes Poetic Princess Name: Lisa Last Online: 05-05-2008 05:49 AM	Re: RUSTIC MOON - Haiku The Following Text Is Quoted: Originally Posted by Harry Love this one Lisa, it is so visually described, very nice work indeeed catch up with you later Harry

12-15-2006, 07:50 PM	#5 (permalink)
Echoes Poetic Princess Name: Lisa Last Online: 05-05-2008 05:49 AM	Re: RUSTIC MOON - Haiku The Following Text Is Quoted: Originally Posted by PaintedDiary LOVED IT!!!!! Got any more chocolate for me and Harry? Lol!!!! Fantabulous!!!! Painted Painted I'll pour some cocoa for you and Harry

12-16-2006, 04:00 AM	#6 (permalink)
Harry Member Name: Harry Last Online: 07-08-2007 05:50 AM	Re: RUSTIC MOON - Haiku you are so welcome Lisa, love this one it's freezing here, I sure could use that cup of cocoa

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12-16-2006, 06:36 PM	#7 (permalink)
Echoes Poetic Princess Name: Lisa Last Online: 05-05-2008 05:49 AM	Re: RUSTIC MOON - Haiku again Harry it's cold here too

12-17-2006, 01:55 AM	#8 (permalink)
Echoes Poetic Princess Name: Lisa Last Online: 05-05-2008 05:49 AM	Re: RUSTIC MOON - Haiku Hey Harry, I changed the lines around like you suggested, what do you think? I think I like the orignal version best

12-17-2006, 03:02 AM	#9 (permalink)
MsJacquiiC Miss Understood Name: Jacquii Cooke Gender: Location: In a cloud of smoke. MsJacquiiC's Mood: Last Online: Today 03:30 AM	Re: RUSTIC MOON - Haiku Hey ECHOES - Just write for the season -- Love the term "rustic moon shadow" - very nice haiku! Thanx for sharing Jacquii.
	“I do use powerful words to evoke emotion, but also to stimulate imagination. If one can 'see' the words dance before his eyes - then he can likely feel, smell and even taste them as well. And I do thoroughly enjoy really tasty poems. My poetry is an emotions-fest sprinkled with a little garlic salt, Mrs. Dash, fresh ginger and Tabasco sauce... My poetry is like a piece of General Tso's chicken tossed in ghetto soul.” --- MsJacquiiC JacquiiCooke.com \| Poetica Magnifique Professional Web & Graphic Design Services GreetingsGalleryOnline \| Beautifully Free e-Cards You REALLY Like Us? ==> Support JPiC with a donation or Purchase a premium membership

12-17-2006, 05:32 PM	#10 (permalink)
Echoes Poetic Princess Name: Lisa Last Online: 05-05-2008 05:49 AM	Re: RUSTIC MOON - Haiku Hi Jacquii so much for reading and commenting

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