Creative Traditional:

[JolieH]

Small friend
the world is in your hands
hold her gently,
while she's in your trance.

Each race,
his history, clay
a piece to mold
a sculptor's dream.

[Benny]

Powerful words! Sounds like an ode' to truth to me, Jolie. Wonderfully done in so few words. Truth is like that...

[PaintedDiary]

Oh Jolie....I am in love with this piece. It is the epitome of an artist's grace upon the media as well. Words ring so true, and are so innocent, if you will. The picture with the poem is brilliant together and adds to the depth of the poem. The brevity also adds another dimension and this is simply brilliant. Love it, excellent rating, and going in my favorites!!!! Love ya!

Kimberly

[JolieH]

This is one of my favorite sculptures of Madonna and Jesus. The picture is a bookmark.
I keep it on my easel. It’s one of my favorite things. It truly is a sculptures dream.

Thank You Benny and Kim
I haven’t had many comments on this poem, and I think it’s one of the best I’ve written.

[Mysty]

Absolutely beautiful Jolie ..... Stunningly short but full of meaning.. I love this style of writing myself...... you have done this Beautifully.. Love this one Jolie

Mysty

[Curtis Spider Lee]

We are all in debt to are parents and most of all God.I love the way your poem makes sure we know we owe ourselves and not just Ideals, ( so it seems) but dreams and then some! Thank You for your beautyful write Lolie.

[Uriah Hamilton]

Lovely image and poem, the light of spiritual hope.