Creative Traditional:

[Kit Carson]

Sea

blue green
deep water
dolphins playing off
the coast of Maui is
the very best part of life
"Life's eternal circle...ocean"


mjcarson
6-16-07

[Jer4clarity]

Mike,

Even Better!


SEA - Vast subject matter here great WORD to Title you work

blue green - great visual definition
deep water - great matter definition
dolphins playing off
the coast of Maui is
the very best part of life - close...a story about your title SEA
"Life's eternal circle is here" - close - what two syllable word could replace "is here"?

I'm being a little picky here only because I know you want to enhance your form.

I really like your enthusiasm and want to help you.

Thanks for honoring the CP with you time and talent.

Jerry

[Bear]

Wonderful penning Kit
handshakes
bear

[Kit Carson]

Thank you very much Bear
Kit

[Sally Roberts]

Kit:
WOW! Great tribute to the sea. I love the style. It's perfect!
I love the sea and with that said.
AWESOME job!

Thanks for this one

Blessings

[Kit Carson]

Thank you Sally,
The sea and I had quite a tango!

[Sally Roberts]

Mike:

I am very happy that you survived the rages of the sea. And writing about it through your memories is difficult in itself.

Thanks for sharing your ordeal with us.

Blessings

[Kit Carson]

Thank you, my friend, you are very kind. since I can't seem to get the last word in with you my friend (not complaining, love talking to you!) I'll go ahead and tell you this. Yes I did! Opened the box! Found the priceless photo album my wife had given up finding and much distressed over. Found From The Serpent's Knee, whoops, well I was close! Started typing it last night and some more this morning, remembered why I choose to be a poet! Brevity! It's been a long time since typing class and 100 words per minute! I'm putting it on word and it is good, it's just going to be slow! I am having to edit a bit as I go. But it's all good.

[Echoes]

very visually scribed, nice work

[Kit Carson]

Thank you Echoes. I still love that picture.