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Old 06-16-2007, 12:44 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Sea

blue green
deep water
dolphins playing off
the coast of Maui is
the very best part of life
"Life's eternal circle...ocean"


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Old 06-16-2007, 03:20 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Mike,

Even Better!



SEA - Vast subject matter here great WORD to Title you work

blue green - great visual definition
deep water - great matter definition
dolphins playing off
the coast of Maui is
the very best part of life - close...a story about your title SEA
"Life's eternal circle is here" - close - what two syllable word could replace "is here"?

I'm being a little picky here only because I know you want to enhance your form.

I really like your enthusiasm and want to help you.

Thanks for honoring the CP with you time and talent.

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Old 06-17-2007, 03:17 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Wonderful penning Kit
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Old 06-17-2007, 08:55 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Thank you very much Bear
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Old 06-17-2007, 02:52 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Kit:
WOW! Great tribute to the sea. I love the style. It's perfect!
I love the sea and with that said.
AWESOME job!

Thanks for this one

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Honor the old ones in deed and name
let love and light be our guides again.
 

Old 06-17-2007, 03:00 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Thank you Sally,
The sea and I had quite a tango!
 

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Old 06-17-2007, 03:52 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Mike:

I am very happy that you survived the rages of the sea. And writing about it through your memories is difficult in itself.

Thanks for sharing your ordeal with us.

Blessings
 

Old 06-24-2007, 07:58 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Thank you, my friend, you are very kind. since I can't seem to get the last word in with you my friend (not complaining, love talking to you!) I'll go ahead and tell you this. Yes I did! Opened the box! Found the priceless photo album my wife had given up finding and much distressed over. Found From The Serpent's Knee, whoops, well I was close! Started typing it last night and some more this morning, remembered why I choose to be a poet! Brevity! It's been a long time since typing class and 100 words per minute! I'm putting it on word and it is good, it's just going to be slow! I am having to edit a bit as I go. But it's all good.
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Old 06-25-2007, 03:23 AM   #9 (permalink)
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very visually scribed, nice work
 

Old 07-26-2007, 10:47 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Thank you Echoes. I still love that picture.
 


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