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Secrets On The Wind ~ Sonnet

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Old 04-19-2008, 05:59 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Dear Karen,

This is beautiful....I too love nature poems and I love the concept of the leaves carrying secrets...stunning. Just like the rain...oh boy...if the rain could speak..for it is recycled and holds many secrets. I love love love this!

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Old 04-20-2008, 07:16 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Thank you so much Kim.
If the rain could speak I think
we'd be in trouble...lol
Glad you liked my Sonnet


Nightlife calls me.
Through her I am free.
It's the only way to be,
all caught up in a mystery!
Born with full moon fever,
I can make you a believer!
For I am the moonchild,
truly born to be wild!
 

Old 05-02-2008, 04:59 PM   #13 (permalink)
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There's a unique tension with the dead leaf and the green grass. I love the illustration as well. I feel there's a defiance against death in the message because the dead leaf is still above ground and possibly still being blowed by the wind because it won't settle for decay. Interesting and I'm going to read it some more. You truly scratched my mind with this radiant write Moonchild.
 

Old 05-02-2008, 05:03 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Thank you Tha-Emissary.
You are right, there is a defiance
with death here. Good spot!
I'm glad you like it and will read more*hugs*
 


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