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Old 04-30-2008, 11:27 AM   #1 (permalink)
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lifting sleepy heads through rich black soil
emerging seedlings awaken
turning faces to the sun
embraced by morning light
dripping with cool dew
impatiently
infused hope
begins
life
 

Old 05-02-2008, 05:44 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Beautiful Nonet with perfect form too.
Really enjoyed this and will read again.
Excellent job!
 

Old 05-02-2008, 06:06 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks so much for your lovely comments. I truly appreciate them.
 

Old 05-02-2008, 09:28 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Lovely,
I can picture a garden about which one cares deeply.
 

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Thanks for your lovely comment.
 

Old 05-05-2008, 02:57 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Very nice and it's a good parallel to a person getting up in the morning to start their day.
 

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Well thank you so much. I really appreciate that you took the time to read the poem. I hadn't thought about the similarity of getting up to start your day, but you are right.
 


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