Creative Traditional:

[Curtis Spider Lee]

A silken face.
A baby's face.
Moon lights at your door step.
Sweet song voice.
Sweet mother's voice.
Now whispers sweet songs-
as silken baby slept.

[MsJacquiiC]

So says the Man bitten by poetic Spider LOL - a very interesting poem that can be read many different ways CURTIS - I enjoyed this short poem very much.

Thanx for the sharing

Jacquii.

[Curtis Spider Lee]

Thank You kindly Ms. Jacquiic I truely appreciate your thoughts on this work. Even a Spider as a soft spot!

[nomadicrhymer]

Spider, Silken Baby, huh? I'm kinda getting a picture of a spider murmuring and soothing a "catch" in her silken web. lol! Or am I letting my imagination run away? It could just be a soft, luscious little baby in her bed, having a wonderfully peaceful slumber...as they tend to do.

Nice one!

Nomad

[PaintedDiary]

Dear Spidey ,

Hmmmm...a baby's face, or a baby spider's face....but a spider would moonlight at my doorstep. As I hate spiders...however, for only you did I envision, a baby spider, beig sung to by its hairy mother (lol), and slumbering peacefully. Oh my goodness, what a vision! Loved this poem Spider!!! I also thought the scheme of aa b cc d b was very nice, and added that unique touch to the poem. But you have me lookin' around now for any unwanted silken babies!!!!! LOL Love Ya!!

~~~~~KIMBERLY~~~:< (@

[Benny]

Wow...I also have a vision of being caught in that web...and 'mother' comes to check on her 'little one' until the appointed time. Great work here.

[Jeez]

The thoughts of
momma, singing songs
to the baby as she
slept.

Soft and tender
momeries.

Thanks for the
read.

[Curtis Spider Lee]

My o my Nomad, so many thoughts into one web! However they are as enjoyable as your mind see fit to enjoy! Thank You for your "many" thoughts on this poem and sharing them with us all !

[Curtis Spider Lee]

Yes Painted One, this is quite the Spider's twist! A lullaby to rock all to sleep, except the child suport unit! Thank You for your taking the time to read and comment of this work!

[Curtis Spider Lee]

Thanks Benny, your visions to this work are great and true! Thank You for your thoughts here!