Creative Traditional:

[TamareEsperes]

When I am alone I think to myself. I think of the thousands of grains of sand that breathes life into my glass, of the thousands of years they’ve spent ashore and the passing it took for them to become a whole thing. Enjoy the wine as I do little things! I cheer you, for without you there would be no celebration.

[mysticpoet729]

nice poem

[PaintedDiary]

Very nice, and it is the small things that have the most monumental impact at times. We often take things for granted, and it was a pleasure to read your "little thought". Thank you for sharing this.

Kimberly

[TamareEsperes]

thanks you guys! I would like to make it longer but I don't have anything at the moment

[zaac]

this is actually a quite nicely written free style. you have made the words feel very good fitting together the way you have.

you have a new fan

zaac

[Jer4clarity]

Tamare,

As I read your work I celebrate you and your expressions. Thanks for sharing!

You have a wonderful gift!

Yours,

Jerry