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Sonnet with a Smile

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Old 12-06-2007, 05:48 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Sonnet with a Smile

When I’m with her there’s magic in the air -
a speck of stardust falls down from the sky
to wink invitingly within her eye
and we leave for a world that is so rare.
A world where anger turns to happy grins
and lips are sealéd with a loving kiss
while cool is measured by our tongues in bliss
and hot is how our love-making begins.
But some are shocked when we start our role-play.
Huh! Roll your eyes or cry , you think we care?
We’re not embarrassed by what you may say
and never undecided ‘bout the masks we’ll wear -
a prince and she’s my princess for a day -
we're living in sandcastles in the air.
 

Old 12-22-2007, 03:26 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Great poem....I can't make up my mind if it is about lovers or two children...WAIT...there's not that much difference, is there?
 

Old 12-22-2007, 09:30 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Ha ha Benny. Love makes you young at heart doesn't it. Thanks.
 


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