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Old 03-03-2008, 11:50 PM   #1 (permalink)
Name: Lindsay Alan Laurie
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In a quiet pristine valley
Enclosing Harold’s Creek,
I walked the tracks in forest
With a flora that’s unique.
Today I quietly tread these tracks,
My feet move stealthily.
I could not believe I saw the prize
That grazed ahead of me!

There stood graceful beauty.
I must have been down wind,
For feeding went on unconcerned
As I became positioned,
Slowly lifting to take aim.
My trigger finger bends.
The gentle deer was in my sights…
I shot with my camera lens.
 

Old 03-04-2008, 08:53 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Name: Karen Davies
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Default Re: Stalker
Wonderful rhyme and I enjoyed
the fact that you didn't shoot him with a gun.
Great write!
 


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