Creative Traditional:

[JolieH]

Still Dreaming

Early morning chores are my favorite, a cup of coffee, sugar, milk. The back yard awake with birdsongs and butterflies. Two jays argue in the pecan tree. A hummingbird searches the lemon, dances in the sprinkler. A miniture rainbow stretches over wet grass on early sunlight. Fences covered in morning glories make bugles for garden fairies, secluding life. I make rounds, water porch plants, remove dead roses, pick up fallen fruit. No cares, no worries, no house, kids, job, or life - a dream continued, nature’s attendant, guardian of the blooms and thirsty fruit. I sip my coffee.


Warm morning sunlight
Dewy grass under bare feet
Water can sprinkles

[Kit Carson]

Very good. I love that picture you painted for us. Tommorrow morning as I sip my chocalate silk blended vanilla carmel favored coffe at work, I'll think about where I'ld rather be.

[Checkmate]

excellent job...great imagery...feels like i am right there...seeing and hearing every bit of it...great post.

[PaintedDiary]

Stunning Haibun Jolie! The affective pictures are stimulating! Please post a copy in my Haibun thread as well when you get a chance.

Kim

[JolieH]

Thanks Mike, Scott, and Kimberly,

I had fun writng this. If anyone is else is writing these, I found a site that publishes them.

contemporary haibun Online: An Edited Journal

I wonder if they'd take this one?

[PaintedDiary]

Yes, in my research of the form I found that site and others...that would be great if you submitted.

Kim