syw syw syw

BekiLynn · 04-30-2008, 06:20 AM

skin on skin
your mouth on my mouth -
what more do we need?

Tha-Emissary · 05-02-2008, 04:53 PM

I'm speechless!

butchiesmom · 05-02-2008, 05:05 PM

What more indeed! I read this several times, it was easy since there's not much there, word wise. But! Image wise? Hooboy! You've created an image I can't get out of my mind!

hugs,
Gail

BekiLynn · 05-05-2008, 05:23 AM

Thank you both - I am pleased it touches you

nomadicrhymer · 05-06-2008, 03:23 PM

Beautiful imagery Beki! The poem is tiny and tight...the impact huge and wide-spreading!

Nomad

PaintedDiary · 05-06-2008, 07:04 PM

Great lasting imagery Beki and I love the title as well. The brevity of this lil' gem, combined with the content is outstanding. It is lasting indeed!

Kim

SarahNSH · 05-06-2008, 10:01 PM

Oh, wow, this definitely says a lot and everything it needs to say within three short stanzas and it's very powerful even for how small it is. I really enjoyed this and I think you did a great job with it. You say a lot with so few words and I'm glad that I came across this poem and got to read it. Keep on writing!

Bear · 05-22-2008, 06:38 PM

A wonderful and wonderful image BIKILYNN so few words that leaves an everlast image
hugs kisses
tom