Creative Traditional:

[Phonoho]

Heard
Your words
But dismiss
The lies you spake,
I tire of hearing all the noise you make.

Guile is fearing the call your voices fake,
My soul you take
And nothing
More is
Stirred.

Third
In turn,
A cuckhold
Whose heart you break,
Have slept too long but now am wide awake.
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[JolieH]

What poor man's nest your wife has layed her eggs?

A well crafted poem - admirer of the great Will Shakespeare I presume?

[Moonchild]

Perfect form and good content.
This is really good work, enjoyed!
Thanks for sharing

[Phonoho]

Thank you for reading. This was one of my closed form challenge entries on another forum. I sometimes use variations of this form, altering the syllable count.
Yes, I am a fan of Willy, though I don't try to imitate his style.

[Jer4clarity]

James,

This short poem carries quite a punch. The words have been carefully crafted and bring the reader easily to its conclusion. My Fav:

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Guile is fearing the call your voices fake,
My soul you take
And nothing
More is
Stirred.

and alas, you and your reader are freed!

Wonderful!

Jerry

[PaintedDiary]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Phonoho

Heard
Your words
But dismiss
The lies you spake,
I tire of hearing all the noise you make.

Guile is fearing the call your voices fake,
My soul you take
And nothing
More is
Stirred.

Third
In turn,
A cuckhold
Whose heart you break,
Have slept too long but now am wide awake.
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Dear Phono,

I really loved this. In its brevity is a volume of truth and a message unfolds. Great write here you have. Truly a lovely piece. Thank you for sharing. An excellent rating!

Kim

[Phonoho]

Heard
Your words
But dismiss
The lies you spake,
I tire of hearing all the noise you make.

Guile is fearing the call your voices fake,
My soul you take
And nothing
More is
Stirred.

Third
In turn,
A cuckhold
Whose heart you break,
Have slept too long but now am wide awake.

This is how it was formatted originally. Non-traditional, I know, but I felt it represented a movement away from darkness and deceipt, toward light and awareness.
Thank you, Jerry.