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Old 08-04-2007, 05:00 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Thermal Ribbons Sally Roberts Started This Thread
True black
was interupted
in the silent
free form night,
Thermal ribbons
spiraled inward
to cascade
reflected light.

In ripple
cliff like patterns
s t r e t c h i n g
onward into verse,
Blend shell like tears
in waterfalls
beyond our universe
.
Forestdawn
Goddess of the green grove.
Honor the old ones in deed and name
let love and light be our guides again.
 

Old 08-04-2007, 05:34 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Default Re: Thermal Ribbons
Sally,

You seem to effortlessly spin words around nature and the universe. I enjoyed the brevity and simplicity within vast imagery and meaning.

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reflected light.
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